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Post by foxilized on Oct 23, 2009 18:41:33 GMT
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Post by sid on Oct 24, 2009 10:10:12 GMT
Hey, i really like 'em The first one, though... Mmh, i think i've already read it (in italian, of course) in a Ray Bradbury book
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Post by [][][]cordylus[][][] on Oct 24, 2009 13:43:43 GMT
I like the mammal one the most. And I love that raptor drawing.
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Post by Horridus on Oct 24, 2009 18:03:06 GMT
Generally excellent - The Dinosaur Parade is probably a bit too long for its own good, the rhyming couplets get tiresome (the Tyrannosaurus stanza in particular is a bit awful - "Never could begin to bore us" - and it's bizarre that he references "Brontosaurus"). I liked I'm Sedimental Over You more, it's a really clever idea and the rhyming doesn't grate. The best is definitely I Hate Mammals, it suits his rhyming style the best. Has he written any non-rhyming poems?
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Post by foxilized on Oct 24, 2009 18:30:16 GMT
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